Celebrating the Semicolon in a Most Unlikely Location
Cary Conover for The New York Times
Neil Neches, on a No. 5 train, underneath the placard that has earned him plaudits for his proper use of the semicolon.By SAM ROBERTS
Published: February 18, 2008Correction Appended
It was nearly hidden on a New York City Transit public service placard exhorting subway riders not to leave their newspaper behind when they get off the train.
“Please put it in a trash can,” riders are reminded. After which Neil Neches, an erudite writer in the transit agency’s marketing and service information department, inserted a semicolon. The rest of the sentence reads, “that’s good news for everyone.”
Semicolon sightings in the city are unusual, period, much less in exhortations drafted by committees of civil servants. In literature and journalism, not to mention in advertising, the semicolon has been largely jettisoned as a pretentious anachronism.
Americans, in particular, prefer shorter sentences without, as style books advise, that distinct division between statements that are closely related but require a separation more prolonged than a conjunction and more emphatic than a comma.
“When Hemingway killed himself he put a period at the end of his life,” Kurt Vonnegut once said. “Old age is more like a semicolon.”
In terms of punctuation, semicolons signal something New Yorkers rarely do. Frank McCourt, the writer and former English teacher at Stuyvesant High School, describes the semicolon as the yellow traffic light of a “New York sentence.” In response, most New Yorkers accelerate; they don’t pause to contemplate.
Semicolons are supposed to be introduced into the curriculum of the New York City public schools in the third grade. That is where Mr. Neches, the 55-year-old New York City Transit marketing manager, learned them, before graduating from Tilden High School and Brooklyn College, where he majored in English and later received a master’s degree in creative writing.
But, whatever one’s personal feelings about semicolons, some people don’t use them because they never learned how.
In fact, when Mr. Neches was informed by a supervisor that a reporter was inquiring about who was responsible for the semicolon, he was concerned.
“I thought at first somebody was complaining,” he said.
One of the school system’s most notorious graduates, David Berkowitz, the Son of Sam serial killer who taunted police and the press with rambling handwritten notes, was, as the columnist Jimmy Breslin wrote, the only murderer he ever encountered who could wield a semicolon just as well as a revolver. (Mr. Berkowitz, by the way, is now serving an even longer sentence.)
But the rules of grammar are routinely violated on both sides of the law.
People have lost fortunes and even been put to death because of imprecise punctuation involving semicolons in legal papers. In 2004, a court in San Francisco rejected a conservative group’s challenge to a statute allowing gay marriage because the operative phrases were separated incorrectly by a semicolon instead of by the proper conjunction.
Louis Menand, an English professor at Harvard and a staff writer at The New Yorker, pronounced the subway poster’s use of the semicolon to be “impeccable.”
Lynne Truss, author of “Eats, Shoots & Leaves: The Zero Tolerance Approach to Punctuation,” called it a “lovely example” of proper punctuation.
Geoffrey Nunberg, a professor of linguistics at the University of California, Berkeley, praised the “burgeoning of punctuational literacy in unlikely places.”
Allan M. Siegal, a longtime arbiter of New York Times style before retiring, opined, “The semicolon is correct, though I’d have used a colon, which I think would be a bit more sophisticated in that sentence.”
The linguist Noam Chomsky sniffed, “I suppose Bush would claim it’s the effect of No Child Left Behind.”
New York City Transit’s unintended agenda notwithstanding, e-mail messages and text-messaging may jeopardize the last vestiges of semicolons. They still live on, though, in emoticons, those graphic emblems of our grins, grimaces and other facial expressions.
The semicolon, befittingly, symbolizes a wink.
This article has been revised to reflect the following correction:
Correction: February 19, 2008
An article in some editions on Monday about a New York City Transit employee’s deft use of the semicolon in a public service placard was less deft in its punctuation of the title of a book by Lynne Truss, who called the placard a “lovely example” of proper punctuation. The title of the book is “Eats, Shoots & Leaves” — not “Eats Shoots & Leaves.” (The subtitle of Ms. Truss’s book is “The Zero Tolerance Approach to Punctuation.”)
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February 26, 2008 at 9:58 pm
Jenna originally posted a link to the comments on this article.
I’ll try to copy them here:
February 25, 2008
Letters
A Momentary Pause, in Praise of Punctuation
To the Editor:
Re “Celebrating the Semicolon in a Most Unlikely Location” (news article, Feb. 18):
This lovely article about a correctly used semicolon in a subway poster doesn’t actually state the rule for using this punctuation mark.
I tell my students it is no accident that the mark is half-comma and half-period. The semicolon separates two sentences, as does a period, but it signals a closer relationship between the two thoughts than a period would, more like the pause of a comma.
Hence, “Please put it in a trash can; that’s good news for everyone” consists of two independent clauses, the latter building on the former. “That” in the second part refers back to the act of putting, referred to in the first part.
There are other uses for the semicolon, but this is a great one!
Susan J. Behrens,
Brooklyn, Feb. 18, 2008
The writer teaches linguistics at Marymount Manhattan College.
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To the Editor:
I think we all ought to take time to commemorate the subtleties of punctuation. Internet correspondence has cavalierly reduced it to an adopted linguistic device, a mere signification of speech.
Yet punctuation has the possibility to be so much more; to appropriate T. S. Eliot’s description of the end of the world, it can conclude one’s thoughts “not with a bang but a whimper.”
It is the remnant of a gentler world, and its revival and its celebration can only be enriching for modern society.
Alexandra Buder Shapiro
Philadelphia, Feb. 19, 2008
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To the Editor:
Neil Neches, a writer in New York City Transit’s marketing and service information department, may have command of the proper use of a semicolon, but the transit agency’s message that includes that semicolon is bad news for the environment.
Riders should be encouraged to recycle their newspapers, not trash them.
At Grand Central Terminal, there are large newspaper recycling bins on the train platforms; that’s good news for our planet.
Kara Pham
New York, Feb. 19, 2008
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To the Editor:
A fleeing felon; an outsider;
Considered grammatically unsound;
Pariah of punctuation marks;
Seeking shelter underground.
Leon Freilich
Brooklyn, Feb. 18, 2008
March 16, 2008 at 11:56 pm
I like this article; it makes me happy. In my quest to wean myself off em-dash dependancy, I discovered another punctuation mark to wield. Oh, joy!